Wednesday, June 13, 2012

My Ending For Licked

It is a fly swat and swatted dad in the face and then licked it and then smacked Mr Spinks in the face dad then went pale. Then Mr Spinks went mental and went to leave but I stopped him to say “Bye”. When he is gone dad bursts into flames and grounded me for 1 million years and said I had to do all the chores but mum said I didn’t have to cause dad broke his promise.

2 comments:

  1. Great Bianca
    What promise was it in the story?

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  2. Cool B

    I love how you said that Mr Spinks went mental and also the part where dad burst into flames.

    Mum is a real softy. hahaha

    Courtney :)

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