Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Autumn Leaf


Autumn Leaf

Waiting and waiting to fall

crispy and pointy

Falling falling smack upon
the ground        

The wind pushing pushing
along the ground

All different shapes and
colours

Crashing into each
other.


WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA

SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation):l
Made the nouns do something:l
Started each new description on a new line:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
:)

4 comments:

  1. That's really cool Bianca
    Mummy

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  2. You read your poem with great expression and timing!

    Well done, Bianca.

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  3. Awesome poem Bianca, I like how you had an expression on your voice. What was your favourite part about using Fotobabble and what would you rate it?

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  4. Amazing poem Bianca, I like how it is not to long.

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