Showing posts with label poem. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poem. Show all posts

Thursday, March 28, 2013

It's not easy being a Pukeko


It’s not easy being a Pukeko

Walking around minding my own business when crunch a car hit my brother.
Swimming in the swamp when oops I swam into some moss.
Spying through the bushes when crash someone banged into me.
Now what is it
Its a giant help ohh it’s taking photo’s time to pose, Click ahh the light to bright  I can not see
time to fly.
bye
got to go look after the little ones
oh forgot can’t fly
have to walk
um maybe I will run

It’s not easy being a Pukeko

By Bianca





hoped you enjoyed my fotobable

Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Autumn Leaf


Autumn Leaf

Waiting and waiting to fall

crispy and pointy

Falling falling smack upon
the ground        

The wind pushing pushing
along the ground

All different shapes and
colours

Crashing into each
other.


WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA

SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation):l
Made the nouns do something:l
Started each new description on a new line:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
:)