A good leader

I think my dance teacher is a good leader. Because she likes to dance and she made her own class.

She teaches modern jazz, ballet and tap. Before and after me she teaches ballet. She teaches me modern jazz. She lives right at the other end of Willow Park Road. That’s the end away from the main road. Each time I go there she teaches me something new. Last time and the time before it was hard.  She teaches me long ones and she teaches me short ones. Sometimes she teaches me bits of them. She is a very good leader.

Autumn Leaf

Autumn Leaf

Waiting and waiting to fall

crispy and pointy

Falling falling smack upon

the ground        

The wind pushing pushing

along the ground

All different shapes and

colours

Crashing into each

other.

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing SUCCESS CRITERIA	SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)	:l
Made the nouns do something	:l
Started each new description on a new line	:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense (may include a who, where, why, what, when).	:)