Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, March 28, 2013

It's not easy being a Pukeko


It’s not easy being a Pukeko

Walking around minding my own business when crunch a car hit my brother.
Swimming in the swamp when oops I swam into some moss.
Spying through the bushes when crash someone banged into me.
Now what is it
Its a giant help ohh it’s taking photo’s time to pose, Click ahh the light to bright  I can not see
time to fly.
bye
got to go look after the little ones
oh forgot can’t fly
have to walk
um maybe I will run

It’s not easy being a Pukeko

By Bianca





hoped you enjoyed my fotobable

Monday, March 18, 2013

stuck on bear island

Have you ever been stuck on an island with bear’s? I have and here is how it happened.



“AHHH” I said as a huge wave caved over us. We got washed ashore onto the rocky shore of bear island. It was so scary I started to cry because there were bears on the island and I didn't want to get eaten by a hungry bear. Mum said she was going to take me on a hunt around bear Island, while nana and pop and the others fixed the boat, so I said yes. We went around a corner and “ AHHH” I screamed as I saw a...   cute little seal  bet you thought it was a bear eh but it wasn't so back to the story. I went to run up to it but mum stopped me just in time and said that if the mummy seal was there it would hurt me very badly. After that we started heading back to the boat and saw that it was all fixed. It was still wet but it was ready to go so we went back to Waimarama. The wave’s were huge and it made the boat jump. We went back to my nana’s and pop's house (they live in Waimarama) to get washed off.

You thought bear island actually had bears. I thought that too when I unexpectedly went there  but it doesn't have bears don don don!!!!!!!!

Mystery Person

Can you guess who I am? I am a mystery year 6 girl in room 20.

WHAT I LOOK LIKE:
I have diamond blue eyes. My blondish brownish hair. I have very light pink skin that is easily sunburned. My freckles cover my face like a blanket. I am as pretty as  a model. My cheeks are as red as a rose. I do not have a fringe.  I’ve got sparkling earrings. I am as tall as a light switch

can you guess who I am?


Monday, December 17, 2012

The Four Friends

One day Rosetta was going for a walk to her nana’s. She had to walk through a spooky forest. Rosetta was all alone so she thought. There were Three little fairies following her. There names are tinkerbell, Silvermist and Furn. Rosetta could hear them talking so she started running. She run so fast she just about ran into the forest. “whoa that was so so close I just about went in the spooky forest” She said. “spooky forest that not the spooky forest” said Furn "The spooky forest is next door" replied silvermist "Yes she must be scared because it is spooky on the side” tinker bell said “YEAH” Said Furn and silvermist Forgetting that Rosetta was there. “Ahhh” Rosetta screamed as she started to run in fact she was so scared she ran into the middle of the forest. “ whoa she ran right into the forest” said tinker bell “Yeah” replied silvermist. “whoa this is the good forest that other forest must be the bad forest that is why it is so spooky in the middle “yes that is her” said furn to the others “ maybe we should go and say hi” said silvermist “yeah” Whispered tink “I guess so” said furn
“HI THERE” shouted tink “AH” screamed Rosetta “w-w-who is there” “sorry if we scared you i am furn and these are my friends silvermist and tinkerbell tink for short we are the fairies of the good forest and we need your help “HELP why would you need my help your fairies you can fly can’t I only have a nana and she has cancer well it is hard for us to fly because evil doctor lightbow is taking away all our flying power


to be continued

no one was harmed in the making of this story

Thursday, October 25, 2012

How to make a magic potion-Puppy love

Does your puppy always try to run away? well he won't any more with my new Puppy Love potion.

You will need:

  • Mixing pot
  • Desert spoon
  • Half a cup of puppy fur
  • One cup of dog food
  • 3 cup of water
  • A pinch of salt
  • A pinch of pepper
  • A chew toy
  • A dragons eye
  • 4 bones
  • Meat
  • A shoe

Making the potion:

  1. First you’ll need to take the pot/bucket and put the water in the pot.
  2. Then grab the puppy fur and the dog food and put it in the pot, mix until the dog food is furry.
  3. Now grab the meat and sprinkle the salt and pepper on it.
  4. Then put the chew toy and the shoe in the pot. 
  5. Now take the bones and poke them into the meat.
  6. Then once you have done that you put the dragon's eye in the potion.
  7. Finally put the meat in with the bones underneath just touching the bottom.
  8. Now you have finished. Now your puppy will never run away again.

Friday, September 28, 2012

Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Smurfette Village


Smurfette Village


One day in a faraway land there were the smurfettes. They were good. Then there was Silva she was bad. And if you be good you just might catch a glimpse of the smurfettes.

One day Silva made a smurf that is a boy Smurfette. All the smurfettes fell in love with Smurf mainly because he was the only boy smurfette apart from Papa Smurf he is the smartest smurf in the land of Smurfette. One day Silva brought a cat. But one day the cat nearly found the smurfettes and then a tree fell on it’s nose so it can’t find the scent of the smurfettes. The next day Silva brought a new cat called Spider. Spider loved to chase smurfettes. Mainly Papa Smurf was making potions but today he is making a potion to turn smurfette village invisible. But the village had ran out of smurfette berries. So Papa Smurf sent Smurf away to pick smurfette berries and on his way he ran into Spider, Silva’s cat. Smurf had seen the cat before but not any of the smurfettes had. Only Papa Smurf and Smurf had seen Spider before. Smurf was also scared that he ran for his life. Forgetting that Silvea and Spider still think that smurf is bad. It  was about half an hour before he realized that he wasn’t being chased by Spider and that Spider and Silva still think that smurf is bad. So he started running back to where he saw Spider. It took another half an hour to get to get there. Just when Smurf thought that spider was gone he caught a glimpse of Spider's tail and ran up to him and asked if Spider could take Smurf to Silva to ask her something. So Spider took smurf to Silva the nasty witch. She was doing three things at a time.

  1. making a potion
  2. talking to her brother Gargamel
  3. cooking Grumpy Smurfette
Smurf what up to Silva and said hi. Silva was happy to see Smurf. Smurf was happy to see Silva and sad to see Grumpy Smurfette in the pot. Smurf asked Silva if she could make a big robot bigger than Silva for him to squash the whole smurfette village. Gumpy Smurfette heard this and straight away knew what Smurf was thinking so she smiled forgetting she was in the pot. Smurf asked Silva what did she see outside. Silva went outside to see and Smurf grabbed the pot’s key and opened the pot told Grumpy Smurf to go tell the others about the plan. Then he put the lid on and locked the pot again then he put the key right back where it was. When Silva came back in she said it was just Spider locked outside again. Smurf then left and on the way back he found some Smurfette berries now Papa smurf could make the village invisible.

no smurfette's where harmed in the making of this story

to be continued 

The Bittern



     


  1. The digger had frightened it.
  1. It is where you get butterflies in your tummy. Yes. he might be sad that the bittern will have no place to live.
  1. Because the bitterns would have no place to live.
  1. They would be angry at the time but happy when they told him
  1. The bittern’s will be very happy that someone cared about them and where they would live


Thursday, September 6, 2012

Production Diary 1


21st August 2012
Dear Diary My name is Bianca. I am 10 years old. In the production we always fight. 

28th of August 2012
 Dear Diary Today we all have our dances done and we are going on stage to show the teachers. Like we were doing yesterday. It is nice to know how you are going to feel Infront of a real ordnance. We are Dance group #1 and I am SO nervous.


Th August 2012
Dear Diary Today we have our cloths sorted out. We are wearing black leggings with frilly bits at the bottom. Miss hill is getting our tops. Our tops are all different  colors. Hopefully I get blue, pink or purple.

3rd September
Dear Diary On Friday we got our tops. I got peach  But luckly Kiri got pink. I asked her if she wanted to swap tops and she said YES. So I got pink and she got the peachy colour.
I am so exited cause after school I am going to oget a PSP and tonight is the night that we have our first performance.
CAN'T WAIT. 






Friday, August 31, 2012

Lily all alone


There once was a robot who lived all alone in the woods her name is Lily. One day Lily
saw a big train came throw. But Lily did not want to hop on the train today because she
was having too much fun and she knew it was going to came back so from that day until
the train comes she just  plays only one game leaf jump. It was a thursday when the train
came back and Lily was just sitting on a leaf. When Lily saw the train she jumped up and
as fast as she could ran after the train until she found an open door. Lily jumped on the
train and went inside it was night so she had a snooze. In the morning she arrived at the
train station . The train station looked very lonely from the outside but from the inside it
was a whole different place it was like a palace but from the outside it looked as dirty as
an junkyard. Inside the place was lots and lots of different robots and they all had the
some sticker as Lily and she saw her mum and dad in the middle of the crowd. “Mum Dad
is that you?”Lily said with a smile “Lily is that you” said Lily's Mum. Lily was so happy that
she found her mum and dad that she jumped up and down. The next day she woke and
she was somewhere where she didn’t know well at least she didn’t remember that this
was her home. Sence she was gone for years she didn’t remember.

Thursday, July 26, 2012

My Olympic Homework

Full name: Sarah Walker
Nickname: Sez
Born: 10 July 1988
Age:24
Born Country: Whakatane, New Zealand
Lives in: Kawerau, New Zealand.
Height: 1.76m (5 ft/ 9 in)
Weight: 74 kg (160 lb)

Current team:Team NZ
Discipline: BMX
role:racer
Rider type: off road


Sarah Walker started doing BMX riding in 1999 when she had to watch her very own brother, Matt, BMX riding one day.

 In 2008 Sarah won SEVEN! races, came 2nd in one race and didn't race two races. She was ranked number one in the world, and was one of the favourites to win the BMX women's event at the 2008 Beijing Olympics, in the end she finished 4th

sarah walker won a total of nine NZ age group titles from 1999 to 2008

On 25 July 2009, Walker won the BMX World Championship in Adelaide, Australia in both the Elite Women and the Elite Cruiser Women events. A crash in during the Elite Cruiser event meant that Walker was not able hold onto her 2009 championship title.

Here are some of her Medal’s


YearPlaceMedals
2011Copenhagensilver
2010Pietermaritzburgsilver
2009AdelaideGold
2009AdelaideGold
2008Taiyuanbronze
2008Taiyuanbronze
2007Victoria silver
2007VictoriaGold
2006Paulobronze
2006Paulosilver
2005Parissilver



how many in each

Women's BMXWomen's CruiserWomen's Cruiser JuniorWomens Cruiser Junior
Gold / silver / bronzeGold / silver / bronzeGold / silver / bronzeGold / silver / bronze
1,1,32,1,1-,-,1-,2,-




Bronze 2007 Women's BMX
Bronze 2008 Women's BMX



Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Dear V.M.Jones

Dear V.M.Jones,

I loved the book Buddy. One of my favorite bits was when Chantel kissed Josh I kinda knew it was coming. It was very sad that Josh didn’t win the race but it was good he chose his brother over winning I would have too, if I didn’t see my brother a lot and he was like that.

My favorite character is Chantel because of what I hear she sounds beautiful. It was funny as well when Chantel kissed Josh because we have a Josh in our class.

Yours sincerely

Bianca

Ps. can you please write back
and if you do can you send a photo of Chantel please
and also a photo of Josh please that is if you have one.

thanks for reading

Monday, June 18, 2012

Term 2 reflection

Reading

My favourite in Reading has been making connections

Something I have learnt is what a connection is

My next step is to not make mistakes

Writing

This is my favourite writing ( Bianca's ending for Licked )

I am proud of Bianca's ending for licked because

I have learnt

  • How to do link’s
  • It’s really funny

My next step is to write faster and learn how to touch type

I like my blog because I can put the stuff I am proud of on there
This is my favourite post (link) because

Here is my blog. my blog

I like commenting on blogs because it makes others feel grateful
This is my favourite comment. wow! Alexandra I really want to read it

Maths

This is my favourite maths game. Peabody subtraction

I am proud of is

I have learnt

  • about fraction

Something I find challenging is...my division

My next step is to know my division better and faster

Art
This is my favourite art  



Topic
Something I have liked in our topic learning is making posters

P.E. / Fitness
What I like about this is
I like playing these games:

  • blob
  • netball dogge
I learn and develop the skills of how to work as a team by playing these games.
Fitness helps me to learn lots of things

Choir / Kapa Haka
I love choir Because I love singing

Wednesday, June 13, 2012

My Ending For Licked

It is a fly swat and swatted dad in the face and then licked it and then smacked Mr Spinks in the face dad then went pale. Then Mr Spinks went mental and went to leave but I stopped him to say “Bye”. When he is gone dad bursts into flames and grounded me for 1 million years and said I had to do all the chores but mum said I didn’t have to cause dad broke his promise.

Monday, May 21, 2012

A good leader

I think my dance teacher is a good leader. Because she likes to dance and she made her own class.

She teaches modern jazz, ballet and tap. Before and after me she teaches ballet. She teaches me modern jazz. She lives right at the other end of Willow Park Road. That’s the end away from the main road. Each time I go there she teaches me something new. Last time and the time before it was hard.  She teaches me long ones and she teaches me short ones. Sometimes she teaches me bits of them. She is a very good leader.

Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Autumn Leaf


Autumn Leaf

Waiting and waiting to fall

crispy and pointy

Falling falling smack upon
the ground        

The wind pushing pushing
along the ground

All different shapes and
colours

Crashing into each
other.


WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA

SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation):l
Made the nouns do something:l
Started each new description on a new line:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
:)

Friday, March 23, 2012

Weet-Bix Tryathlon

On Wednesday 15th of February 2012 I did the Weet-Bix Tryathlon. In the morning I woke and was really happy in fact I was so happy I was on the roof (not literally). I quickly got dressed and had breakfast  (It was Weet-Bix) after Zach (my brother) left, Zara (my sister) was at Nana's house so by now I was ready to go to the tryathlon. “Right I am here,” I said we got my bike out and put it in the transition area, now I am ready. “Mum I see Paige,” I said. We go into the stands where all the stuff is me and Paige got to play a game to win a free toy.

We had a quick warm up then we had to go to the pool. We had to sit in our colours, mine was orange.

When it was our turn to go we got out of our seats and stood by the side of the pool. We got some instructions by the race starter then it was time to get in and get ready. “OK, ready steady go!” and we were off.

It was really was hard to breathe with all the kicking and splashing beside me, then I got out of the pool and ran all the way to my bike. I had to get my top and helmet on then my shoes, I forgot to put my pants on hehehe, but I still had my togs on from the swim and it was alright. I saw Ashlee and Lily so we biked together. Lily fell off her bike near the end of the biking leg.

Then came the hard part, THE RUN!!! I did not think I could make it, but seeing Lily just about give up made me want to help her finish and then I knew to help her I had to finish the race too, so me and Lily helped each other to finish. Coming to the end I needed a drink but all I could see was Corbyn and his chips which were salt and vinegar, my least favourite chips.

When I finish we got our  medals and a drink of water (what I need the whole time), we went and got our photos taken me and Lily got separate ones then one together.

This would have to be one of my best days ever (best triathlon ever).
 

Tuesday, March 6, 2012

Summer


Summer is here, yay! Baby animals are born, gardens get lots of compost ants and flys eat Zara's (my little sister) pizza. Did you now there is enough ants to cover everyone everywhere? (I hope it does not happen).


Remember summer when I got stuck in a tree and you helped me down. Did you hear the birds chirp? I did. Did you feel the itchy mowed grass and it was getting ready to make hay?



Remember the cool wind and the ash fell from the sky. Everyone swam all day on the sunny days. Remember when you went to Waimarama and building sand castles and all the sand in your toes.