Autumn Leaf
Waiting and waiting to fall
crispy and pointy
Falling falling smack upon
the ground
The wind pushing pushing
along the ground
All different shapes and
colours
Crashing into each
other.
| WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing SUCCESS CRITERIA | SELF ASSESSMENT |
| Includes four nouns (from observation) | :l |
| Made the nouns do something | :l |
| Started each new description on a new line | :) |
| Extended each line so it makes more sense (may include a who, where, why, what, when). | :) |
That's really cool Bianca
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You read your poem with great expression and timing!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Bianca.
Awesome poem Bianca, I like how you had an expression on your voice. What was your favourite part about using Fotobabble and what would you rate it?
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem Bianca, I like how it is not to long.
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